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Broken Love Story

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We were both young when I first saw you,
I closed my eyes and the flashback starts
Back when you made me love you.
I’m standing there,
Beautiful you really were,
I thought that you were Romeo and I was Juliet cause you were everything to me, I was begging you please don’t go.
And I thought;
Romeo take me somewhere we can be alone, I keep waiting but you never come, all this is in my head, I don’t know what to think cause you are Romeo and I was a scarlet letter and my buddy said stay away from Juliet, but you are everything to me,
I’m begging you please don’t go.  
I started waiting, wondering if you were going to come around,
My faith in you is fading cause you never showed up,
Then I saw you in the aftertime, you were sitting with a girl holding her hand,
Singing sweet songs that I wanted you to sing to me.
I started crying, and I ran t the bushes all heartbroken;
Cause I dreamt of you say “Marry me Juliet you never have to be alone, I love you and you’re all I really want, I talked to your dad, you can pick out a white dress.” And pulled out a ring; but I’m not what you really want,
You love her and forgot all about me.
Now I’m all broken cause you never made my dream come true.
We were both young when I first saw you.
lol, me and my friends were listening to Love Story by Taylor Swift and we had a little compatetion on who would write a poem similar to the song but a bit different. I didn't win because I was the slowest, and my two other friends wrote a better poem but I still liked mine so I put it up on DeviantArt.

I think some people can relate to it deppends on how you look at this poem...

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